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Rules of Revision, Nov. 28

Shelley BatesNow that you’ve finished the first draft of your story, article, poem, memoir, novel, etc., it’s time to revise. That’s easy. Just follow the rules. Oh…

Fortunately, Shelley Bates, award-winning romance novelist, will discuss how to revise effectively at a meeting of Fremont Area Writers on Saturday, Nov. 28.

Bates, recipient of the RITA award from the Romance Writers of America, has written 24 novels published by Harlequin, Time/Warner, and Hachette Book Group. She has published several more with her own independent press, Moonshell Books.

Her Magnificent Devices steampunk adventure series is written under the name of Shelley Adina. Steampunk is science fiction and fantasy based on19th century steam-powered technology.

In her talk, Bates will explain how to use revision techniques,  including deep character checks and scene outlines. You can find out more about her at http://www.amazon.com/Shelley-Bates/e/B001HMNWWI.

The writers group meets on the fourth Saturday of the month, except in July and December, from 2-4 p.m. at DeVry University, 6600 Dumbarton Circle, in Fremont. Meetings are open to the public.

Fremont Area Writers is a branch of the 1,900-member California Writers Club. To find out more, log on to www.cwc-fremontareawriters.org or contact Shirley Ferrante at (510) 791-8639. 

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Writers and Poets Open Mic! When: 7-9 p.m. Monday, Nov. 23, 2015. Where: Suju’s Coffee, Meeting Room, 3620 Thornton Ave., Fremont. To find out more, contact Tony Pino at up.dragonfly-at-gmail.com.

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Fall is upon us. The leaves are turning glorious colors of red and gold. The wind is carrying them here, there and everywhere. Summer may have ended but your FAW has begun new adventures. 

Liz Breshears, Community Outreach Coordinator, has organized a timeline for the writing contest for Fremont high schoolers sponsored by your FAW.

10/23/15 Deadline for information distributed to high schools

11/14/15 Deadline for Essays (postmark date)                                                                                                     

12/11/15 Judging of essays (feel free to volunteer to be a judge)

1/23/16   Awards ceremony at our January’16 meeting

                 First Place $100, 2nd place $50, 3rd place $25

                 Runners up will receive honorable mention certificates

Robert and Kathy Garfinkle will host the FAW Holiday Pot Luck Saturday, December 12th.

Keep an eye out for the pot luck sign-up sheet, event time and venue address.

We have a preferred date in March 2016 for the FAW sponsored workshop. Your Vice President, Erika Anderson-Bolden, is looking into possible speakers. If you recall, the speaker Erika lined up for the 2015 workshop, Martha Engber, was very well received.

I am pleased to announce Andrew Halligan has volunteered to take the position of FAW Membership Chairman.  Give a cheer for Andrew.

We had a very entertaining speaker for our September meeting and she even brought us chocolate. Aleta George spoke on her topic: “How Research Road Trips Can Enrich Your Life.”

Our October General Meeting Speaker will be Joshua Mohr. He is the author of five novels, including “Damascus,” which The New York Times called “Beat-poet cool.”  He’s also written “Fight Song” and “Some Things that Meant the World to Me,” one of O Magazine’s Top 10 reads of 2009 and a San Francisco Chronicle best-seller, as well as “Termite Parade,” an Editors’ Choice on The New York Times Best Seller List.  His novel “All This Life” was recently published by Counterpoint/Soft Skull.

Remember, should you have a friend who wants support to write, extend an invitation to him/her to be our guest at the next FAW General meeting, Saturday, October 24.

Shirley Ferrante

FAW President